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房間非常整潔,讓人感到舒適。職員都很有禮貌,並且能流利地用英語交流。
那天的氣溫只有1度,雖然房間開了暖氣,我仍然感到有些寒冷。幸好房內有兩張毛毛氈,可以放在被子上,增添了一些溫暖。
另設有自助磨咖啡機和保暖杯,方便隨時使用,讓人感到非常貼心。
不過,房內的兩個枕頭偏薄,我詢問了職員,卻沒有提供額外的枕頭,這點稍顯遺憾。
Very near to convenient store which was a good thing. But as it was winter time, the area was quite cold which we chose not to have BBQ dinner. Also, the view for sunset was blocked by nearby buildings which was a bit disappointing. And the room we stayed had a smoking odour which was a bit unpleasant. However, the room was spacious and beautiful which made the glamping experience good.