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Walls in corridors and rooms painted loooong time ago
Carpets worn out and dangerous to walk on
Mould on walls in bathrooms
Had to ask for another room as the first one was not acceptable for a family stay.
Breakfast at the weekend ok, but week days absolutely awfull( English full breakfast not eatable as tomatos frm the can, mashrooms watery and ols, not able to order other then that.
One of the days the police has visited the hotel.
In the corridor feeling on very siff air, not fresh at all
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The walls in the corridors and rooms appear not to have been painted in a very long time and look tired and neglected. The carpets are heavily worn and feel unsafe to walk on.
There was visible mould on the bathroom walls, which is unacceptable, especially for a family stay. We had to request a different room, as the first one was not suitable or up to standard.
Breakfast was acceptable at the weekend; however, during the week it was absolutely awful. The full English breakfast was inedible — the tomatoes were from a can, the mushrooms were watery and old, and there were no alternative options available to order.
On one of the days, the police
